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Blood Hound by ~Syroya:iconSyroya:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Sonnet


One day, my life got washed away by a flood,
so suddenly it came, yet it went so slow.
And the flowers bloomed on the flow
and out of the wine, grew a leaf bud.
But where the flowers died long ago
there was no life, only some mud.
I gave you a taste of my own blood
just a little drop, to let you know.
Just like a hound, that drop was not enough.
You wanted more, that you could explore.
You wanted more, of my precious red stuff.
So you tracked me down, just like before
and tore me apart, oh so rough.
Until I was there, no more.
©2007-2009 ~Syroya
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Author's Comments

My first Sonnet. ^_^

It just came up.

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~Uberhippie Oct 7, 2007, 10:16:40 AM
This is a very good poem, i very much like the rhythm and the flow of the transition is very smooth, the wording is very good as well i especially like the line "And the flowers bloomed on the flow" its very good imagery defiantly a favourite
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~ConcreteAngel179 Oct 7, 2007, 1:11:07 PM
Very beautiful I love it!!

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I think therefore I am dangerous
We are Angels our Halos just need repairs:floating:
Don't forget to pillage before you burn :evillaugh:
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*RebexTrip Oct 7, 2007, 3:36:00 PM
I like how violence is concealed behind the gentle touch of natural imagery...and for some reason, it reminds me of love/obsession.

(you are getting better and better =D)

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May I become a protector for the protectorless,
A guide for those who travel on the road,
And, for those who wish to cross the water,
May I become a boat, a ship, or a bridge.
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~Tsutsuku-chan Oct 7, 2007, 5:12:21 PM
wow o-o;;;

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"'Don't leave me alone!'
The cry in the night
Of anguish heart-striking
Of soul-killing fright...
Don't leave me alone!'
A world heard that cry"

-Dragonsinger
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~Syroya Oct 8, 2007, 6:39:10 AM
Err, is that good? :p

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My songwriting contest. [link]
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~Syroya Oct 8, 2007, 6:39:22 AM
Thank you. :)

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My songwriting contest. [link]
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~Syroya Oct 8, 2007, 6:39:30 AM
Thanks! :D

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My songwriting contest. [link]
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~Syroya Oct 8, 2007, 6:39:50 AM
Thanks for the :+fav:!

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My songwriting contest. [link]
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*RebexTrip Oct 8, 2007, 8:28:51 AM
anytime. =)

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May I become a protector for the protectorless,
A guide for those who travel on the road,
And, for those who wish to cross the water,
May I become a boat, a ship, or a bridge.
=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~
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