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The Legend by ~Syroya:iconSyroya:





Twenty paces towards the becoming sun,
then five to the chilly northern sky.
Make seventeen more to where you begun
and follow the sun fifty days before you die.

Over the mountains where the dragons rule,
Thúrion will aid you by your side.
Slay the leader but be no fool,
for the Lord has many more places to hide.

The Flame is hidden deep within the earth
and no mortal will come close.
So search for the armour of Commander Perth
and divine you will be for most.

The helmet lies in the northern highlands,
the gloves are in the southern woods.
The body is at Dragon's Islands
and Thúrion's grave has the boots.

With the Flame your destiny is set,
you are the chosen one to conquer the Lord.
But all will not be over yet...
Because you are the one, wielding the Sword.
©2007-2009 ~Syroya
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Author's Comments

The legend of Eternal Flame.
It's a story I have in mind, and the main character finds this ancient text.

Will adjust it probably more to expand it a little further.

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:iconconcreteangel179:
Wow really cool I like it!

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I think therefore I am dangerous
We are Angels our Halos just need repairs:floating:
Don't forget to pillage before you burn :evillaugh:
:iconsyroya:
Thanks! :D

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:iconconcreteangel179:
NP :hug:

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I think therefore I am dangerous
We are Angels our Halos just need repairs:floating:
Don't forget to pillage before you burn :evillaugh:
:iconray72285:
Just sending you a congratulations for being featured in this week's issue of The Dragons of deviantART - [link] :)

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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.
:iconsyroya:
Great! :D

Thanks. :)

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:iconbellatrixblacksnape:
wow, your heart is a poet's heart, it's wonderful! Keep up the good work! :)

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Innocence is part of my charm.
The other part is being a complete PSYCHO!!!
:iconsyroya:
Thank you! :)

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:iconsl33pyincognita:
im usually not very good with commenting on poetry/story type deviations... but it is my opinion that yours is quite good, youve used the appropriate tehniques to convey your message... the story flows very naturally, very good use of run-on lines,,
:iconsyroya:
Even if you are not good commenting this kind of stuff, you sure did put a smile on my face. :D

Thanks. :)

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